Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Indonesian term or phrase:
Tenteram ku rasa di pangkuanmu
English translation:
I feel serene in your lap
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Regi2006
Aug 11, 2010 04:17
14 yrs ago
Indonesian term
Tenteram ku rasa di pangkuanmu
Indonesian to English
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General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters
Ini bagian dari lirik lagu. Pangkuan di sini adalah pangkuan Ibu Pertiwi or something like that.
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Ikram Mahyuddin
Indonesia
Indonesia
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I feel serene in your lap
Saya mengajukan versi lain dari yang dikemukakan oleh Stefanie Chan
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Catherine Muir
: captures the sense of this line of the lyric, without pulling in parts of other lines
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Comment: "Terima kasih semuanya!"
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Stefanie Chan
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Works in: Malay to English, English to Malay, Indonesian to English
My serene feeling in your lap
According to Indonesian-English dictionary, Tenteram ku rasa di pangkuanmu means My serene feeling in your lap
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Irma Wildani Anzia
Indonesia
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And in your arms, I find peace and comfort
Rasanya janggal dan secara pelafalan tak terdengar puitis jika "pangkuan" diterjemahkan harfiah menjadi "lap". Jadi maaf kalau saya ganti menjadi "arms" (pelukan) yang juga mengandung arti intrinsik yang mirip dengan "lap".
Untuk "tenteram", saya terjemahkan menjadi "peace and comfort" agar jumlah suku katanya tidak berbeda jauh dari syair aslinya.
Untuk "tenteram", saya terjemahkan menjadi "peace and comfort" agar jumlah suku katanya tidak berbeda jauh dari syair aslinya.
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Wiyanto Suroso
Indonesia
Indonesia
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Indonesia
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Sink into my serene feeling in your lap o motherland.
Sink into this serene sensation.
http://www.the-guided-meditation-site.com/passive-relaxation...
Floating in the isolation tank helps quiet your mind, and there is a serene feeling of relaxation.
http://www.bravenewtraveler.com/2010/05/04/isolation-tank-ny...
In Atharva-Veda (12/1/ 6 2) Says that "O motherland! We grow up in your lap only and obtain health-giving materials.
http://spritiualnepal.blogspot.com/2009/11/importance-of-mot...
http://www.the-guided-meditation-site.com/passive-relaxation...
Floating in the isolation tank helps quiet your mind, and there is a serene feeling of relaxation.
http://www.bravenewtraveler.com/2010/05/04/isolation-tank-ny...
In Atharva-Veda (12/1/ 6 2) Says that "O motherland! We grow up in your lap only and obtain health-giving materials.
http://spritiualnepal.blogspot.com/2009/11/importance-of-mot...
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In your lap (O Motherland!) I find peace and tranquility
My version.
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Catherine Muir
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Reference:
a line from Hymne Wawasan Kemerdekaan
HYMNE WAWASAN KEMERDEKAAN
Diantara dua benua
yang menghubungkan dua samudra
Aku berpijak, Aku menatap
keagungan karya ciptaannya
dan disana aku dilahirkan
mengarungi jalan kehidupan
Aku berdoa, Aku bekerja
mengisi kemerdekaan bangsa
TENTRAM KURASA DI PANGKUANMU
Oh Ibu Pertiwi terimalah
karya bhaktiku
kan ku pertahankan
wilayah negeriku
bumi nusantara
Diantara dua benua
yang menghubungkan dua samudra
Aku berpijak, Aku menatap
keagungan karya ciptaannya
dan disana aku dilahirkan
mengarungi jalan kehidupan
Aku berdoa, Aku bekerja
mengisi kemerdekaan bangsa
TENTRAM KURASA DI PANGKUANMU
Oh Ibu Pertiwi terimalah
karya bhaktiku
kan ku pertahankan
wilayah negeriku
bumi nusantara
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