German to English Tech/Engineering

Closing up this urgent patent job, I'd first like to thank all of you who so generously helped in its completion. I am very, very grateful.

Finally, I am faced with cleaning things up and would like to pick your brains again with a very basic question: The patent is obviously an industrial roll-up door/gate intended to close off a doorway/passageway/aperture of a door. I have been using "door" for "Tor" but do not like the aesthetics of "door curtain (Torblatt)" or "door arrangement (Toranordnung) etc.

In the literature, these things are referred to as doors, but in the industrial setting I feel "gate" in lieu of "door," would be more appropriate.

Here's the DE title: "Tor anordnung zum Abschluß einer Toröffnung zwischen Räumen mit stark unterschiedlichen Temperatur" which I have translated with "Gate Arrangement for Closure of a Passageway between Rooms with Markedly Different Temperatures."

Since this is a new client, it is critical that this first impression be convincing; I'm sure it will be with your help AGAIN ;)

If you'd like to comment at length, please respond to my email at [email protected].

Most appreciatingly,

Harold