Glossary entry

English term or phrase:

during her house-moving she forgot to send it off

English answer:

while moving house/because she was occupied with moving house she forgot to post it

Added to glossary by lafresita (X)
Sep 26, 2004 16:33
20 yrs ago
English term

her house-moving

English Other Linguistics formal letter - Great Britain
Is this sentence

However, during her house-moving she forgot to send it off.

1) correct grammatically and
2) stylistically (formal English)?

Responses

2 mins
Selected

okay

i find this stylistically acceptable...
Peer comment(s):

agree Kristina Thorne
4 mins
much obliged
disagree jof : ..while moving house......
3 hrs
Sure, 'while moving house' is possible and maybe even cleaner, there's nothing wrong with using 'house-moving', in the English language. Call it stylistic choice. I'm running out of characters for my rebuttal, but simply do a Google on 'house moving' & c.
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+6
2 mins

eliptical in nature and informal stylistically

Mike :)

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Note added at 2 mins (2004-09-26 16:36:14 GMT)
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During her house-moving event, shortened to \"house-moving\".

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Note added at 3 mins (2004-09-26 16:36:44 GMT)
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This is used all the time in speech; however, it is informal in nature, due to its eliptical nature.
Peer comment(s):

agree Vicky Papaprodromou
10 mins
Thank you, Vicky - Mike :)
agree NancyLynn : we also say during her move
27 mins
agree Tehani
1 hr
agree Armorel Young : more formal would be something like "because she was occupied with moving house she forgot to post it"
4 hrs
agree senin
5 hrs
agree Jörgen Slet
15 hrs
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