Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Dutch term or phrase:
offerte VV geannuleerd
English translation:
offer without VC (voluntary continuation)
Added to glossary by
Bryan Crumpler
Jun 26, 2004 20:51
20 yrs ago
Dutch term
United States
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Native in: English (Variants: US, Australian, Indian, Canadian, New Zealand, Scottish, US South, British, UK, Irish, South African) 
Works in: Dutch to English, Flemish to English, Afrikaans to English, and 3 more.
offerte VV geannuleerd
Dutch to English
Bus/Financial
Finance (general)
Payroll/Accounting, Pensionplans, Sickness Benefit Act
The section is titled "Annuleren offerte VV boven max"
The portion of text where the phrase occurs is:
"De beoordeling of er een offerte VV geannuleerd dient te worden aangeboden, vindt plaats in usecase UC0765 Automatisch offreren VV, welke usecase reageert op een wijziging van een FVP aanvraag."
VV = Vrijwillige Voortzetting
UC = Use Case
FVP = Financiering Voortzetting Pensionverzekering
I'm not even close to being sure what is intended here. Seems like either "geannuleerd" or "aangeboden" is extraneous OR I'm reading it wrong. Whatever the case, I can't figure out a clean way to render this in English.
The portion of text where the phrase occurs is:
"De beoordeling of er een offerte VV geannuleerd dient te worden aangeboden, vindt plaats in usecase UC0765 Automatisch offreren VV, welke usecase reageert op een wijziging van een FVP aanvraag."
VV = Vrijwillige Voortzetting
UC = Use Case
FVP = Financiering Voortzetting Pensionverzekering
I'm not even close to being sure what is intended here. Seems like either "geannuleerd" or "aangeboden" is extraneous OR I'm reading it wrong. Whatever the case, I can't figure out a clean way to render this in English.
Proposed translations
(English)
| 3 | offer withou V V |
Daniela Hubrich
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| 3 +1 | "aangeboden" seems redundant to me |
jarry (X)
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| 2 +1 | cancelled offer VV |
Henk Peelen
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Proposed translations
38 mins
Daniela Hubrich
let's build up a bridge
Native in: German
Works in: French to German, English to German, German, and 1 more.
Related KudoZ points
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3
Selected
offer withou V V
in order to make clear that normally the offers automatically include "V V" and that here an offer without V V is submitted, given, offered....
3 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
+1
22 mins
Henk Peelen
Netherlands
Netherlands
Native in Dutch
Netherlands
Polytechnic school; Studio & memoQ
Native in: Dutch 
Works in: German to Dutch, English to Dutch
Related KudoZ points
:
8
cancelled offer VV
no, nothing is superfluous here. 'geannuleerd' means 'in geannuleerde vorm' and is an adverb for 'aangeboden'
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Note added at 2004-06-26 21:18:47 (GMT)
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I\'d like to rewrite this sentence:
In usecase UC0765 Automatisch offreren VV wordt beoordeeld of er een offerte VV in geannuleerde vorm moet worden aangeboden. Deze usecase reageert op een wijziging van een FVP aanvraag.
In usecase UC0765 Automatic offering VV is decided whether een cancelled offer VV has to be offered. This usecase responds on an changed FVP request.
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Note added at 2004-06-28 03:03:35 (GMT)
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Jarry:
Well, I think it seems very logical to me. After the usecase UC0765 has decided the offer submitted in an earlier stage has to be cancelled, they have to give notice to the body to which the offer was submitted, so they have to submit the cancelled offer.
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Note added at 2004-06-26 21:18:47 (GMT)
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I\'d like to rewrite this sentence:
In usecase UC0765 Automatisch offreren VV wordt beoordeeld of er een offerte VV in geannuleerde vorm moet worden aangeboden. Deze usecase reageert op een wijziging van een FVP aanvraag.
In usecase UC0765 Automatic offering VV is decided whether een cancelled offer VV has to be offered. This usecase responds on an changed FVP request.
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Note added at 2004-06-28 03:03:35 (GMT)
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Jarry:
Well, I think it seems very logical to me. After the usecase UC0765 has decided the offer submitted in an earlier stage has to be cancelled, they have to give notice to the body to which the offer was submitted, so they have to submit the cancelled offer.
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
Jacqueline van der Spek
3 mins
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heo later op de avond hoe schoner volk
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| neutral |
jarry (X)
: What would be the sense of submitting a VV proposal/offer in "geannuleerde vorm"? Sorry, but my mind just works on simple logic.
34 mins
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later, so even schoner. See above
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+1
59 mins
"aangeboden" seems redundant to me
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