Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Spanish term or phrase:
Notificación que se hace para su conocimiento
English translation:
This notification is being provided for your information...
Added to glossary by
Cecilia Anrriquez
Jan 14, 2011 18:53
13 yrs ago
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Spanish term
"Fast, high quality, reasonable prices"
Native in: Spanish
Works in: Spanish to English, English to Spanish
Notificación que se hace para su conocimiento
Spanish to English
Other
Government / Politics
carta del centro nacional de visas de los estados unidos
Asì termina la carta: quisiera que me ayuden con la traducción de esta frase:
Notificación que se hace para su conocimiento y demás fines consiguientes. Atte, XX
Notificación que se hace para su conocimiento y demás fines consiguientes. Atte, XX
Proposed translations
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Proposed translations
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5 hrs
Muriel Vasconcellos
United States
United States
Native in English
Specializes in field
United States
Each translation a gem!
Native in: English (Variant: US) 
Works in: Spanish to English, Portuguese to English
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This notification is being provided for your information...
...and further appropriate purposes
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thanks for all the references and alternatives. Many, manu thanks. Cecilia"
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9 mins
Of which you are notified for you your information and ....
Very common wording. The nature of the letter would be useful.
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Note added at 10 mins (2011-01-14 19:03:41 GMT)
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Sorry, take out the word 'you'.
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Note added at 10 mins (2011-01-14 19:03:41 GMT)
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Sorry, take out the word 'you'.
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9 mins
María Eugenia Wachtendorff
Chile
Chile
Native in Spanish
Works in field
Chile
40 Years Business, Legal, Certificates
Native in: Spanish
Works in: English to Spanish, Spanish, Spanish to English
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the above information is for your awareness and other relevant purposes
Es lo que se me ocurre. Ojalá te sirva :)
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Note added at 12 mins (2011-01-14 19:05:50 GMT)
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Creo que quedaría mejor:
"This notification is provided for your awareness and other relevant purposes."
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Note added at 17 mins (2011-01-14 19:10:55 GMT)
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Me parece que SwissTell tiene toda la razón:
"This notification is provided for your information and other relevant purposes."
Usé "awareness" porque me suena mejor como equivalente de "para su conocimiento" y también para evitar la cacofonía de los dos "ation" seguidos, pero las comunicaciones de este tipo no suelen considerar detallitos como los que me enseñaron en mis cursos de redacción comercial :)
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Note added at 12 mins (2011-01-14 19:05:50 GMT)
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Creo que quedaría mejor:
"This notification is provided for your awareness and other relevant purposes."
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Note added at 17 mins (2011-01-14 19:10:55 GMT)
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Me parece que SwissTell tiene toda la razón:
"This notification is provided for your information and other relevant purposes."
Usé "awareness" porque me suena mejor como equivalente de "para su conocimiento" y también para evitar la cacofonía de los dos "ation" seguidos, pero las comunicaciones de este tipo no suelen considerar detallitos como los que me enseñaron en mis cursos de redacción comercial :)
Peer comment(s):
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swisstell
: for your information instead of awareness, IMO, the rest is fine
2 mins
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Sure, Sir! I stand corrected :)
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Robert Forstag
: Agree with SwissTell.
5 mins
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Thank you, Robert.
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philgoddard
: I know this is the literal translation, but you simply wouldn't end a letter like this. I would leave it out.
20 mins
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Hi Phil. In my own translations, I do leave out many sentences and sometimes redo the whole document. However, official (public sector) communications often need to be translated line by line, even indicating the presence of stamps and seals :)
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Eileen Brophy
: I would use information rather than awareness in an official text.
19 hrs
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That's what I did on second though, Eileen. Please see my second note
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neilmac
: I think "awareness" jars a bit...
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Yes, it does, Neil. I corrected that yesterday :)
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Eileen Brophy
Spain
Spain
Native in English
Spain
The Right Word Used in the Right Context
Native in: English (Variant: UK)
Works in: Spanish to English, English to Spanish
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This information is for your knowledge and for any further requirements
Another alternative.
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22 hrs
For your information.
= FYI.
KIS (Keep It Simple)
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Note added at 22 hrs (2011-01-15 17:45:49 GMT)
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I'd simply omit "y demás fines consiguientes". It's a waste of space/ink/time and provides no useful information.
KIS (Keep It Simple)
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Note added at 22 hrs (2011-01-15 17:45:49 GMT)
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I'd simply omit "y demás fines consiguientes". It's a waste of space/ink/time and provides no useful information.
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